Saturday, March 23, 2013

Book Review: Alice in Love and War by Ann Turnbull

Alice Newcombe is unhappy at her uncle's farm. When soldiers from the royalist army seek food and shelter there, she is infatuated with Robin, who gives her kisses and is kind to her. As their relationship quickly develops, Alice knows the path she wants to take: she'll follow the army train so she can be near him at all times, and soon they will be married.

But war does not always go as planned, for anyone. Alice is thrust into the tumult of the English Civil War at the tender age of sixteen, surrounded by strangers, homeless, with no wealth but the knowledge in her father's apothecary book to support her. Her journey leads her to the arms of good people and bad, and just when all seems to go well, it goes horribly, horribly wrong.

The back of this book makes it sound like a typical  romance--please do not go into it thinking it is, or you will probably reach page 35, chuck the book across the room, and wonder how anything could be even worse than Twilight.

By page 35, Alice meets Robin for the first time, sneaks out of the house to smooch him a bit, he takes her virginity, and she's convinced she's completely and totally in love and that they'll get married soon and live happily ever after.

At this point, I was groaning. I had never encountered a character so unbelievably stupid. There was no character development (save for Alice's stupidity) and I thought for sure that this was how it was going to continue: lalala, love love love, then maybe Robin gets killed in the war and she has to grow up a bit. The end.

But then the book shaped into something so much more. Perhaps I should have seen it then--because really, when a character is so mind-numbingly dumb, where is there to go but up? And Alice reaches for the moon and lands among the stars. While she's still hoping on Robin for a good half of the book, the reader begins to see that the situation is hopeless--Robin isn't all he seems, and didn't want love at all. This isn't a happily ever after. Alice goes through difficulties which make her grow up sooner rather than later. She is employed in a good house making herbal teas and poultices for the family. She witnesses the horrors of war first hand and has a great responsibility thrust upon her shoulders. She sees more of the world, and craves to see even more--to learn and grow and become useful.

Alice by the end of the book is nothing like the Alice in the first 35 pages. She is more careful, likable, clever, and bold--at least as much as she can be as a woman in the 1640s.

And the plot, while still a romance, focuses much more on Alice's growth as a character. There is so much symbolism chucked in here I started writing an essay in my head before remembering I'd already graduated. It's a coming-of-age story and a becoming-a-woman story. While set in a historical period, I think there is much to be gained by teenage girls of today reading this book. It's an empowering story of faithfulness and friendship, and faithfulness to yourself.

I was also impressed with the historical details, big and small, that make it clear this is one well-researched book. The setting and time period jump from the pages and suck you in until you've read every last word.

Thursday, March 21, 2013

The woes of visas, etc.

Dear god, does it ever end?

I have been staring at this visa application since before we got married in November, and I'll continue staring at it because it is the visa that never ends, it will go on and on my friends. Some people started applying not knowing what it was, and they'll continue applying forever just because...

No, but seriously.

My visa application STILL isn't in. And you know what I realized today? I have two and a half months left on my current visa.

Two. and a half. months.

Now, we have everything sorted--and that probably sounds like plenty of time to someone who hasn't been in a long distance relationship before and doesn't know the pain and suffering caused by separation. So what I see right now is two and a half months before separation has to occur, and, well, it's a bit panic-inducing.

I realize there's nothing REALLY to panic about. We're going to submit this mammoth on Monday.

Except we were going to submit this mammoth in early February. Then in early March when we couldn't get everything certified. Then this past Monday (surprise work!). Then Tuesday (surprise work!). Then Wednesday (surprise plague!). Then Friday (surprise work!). (For those of you wondering, Thursday was planned-work).

Don't get me wrong, I'm not complaining (well, except about the plague bit). But it seems like something is constantly coming up to get in the way of us submitting this thing. And it really shouldn't be this hard to coordinate a time for us to both get to the post office to get some gosh-darned passport photos done, but dear god, it is.

Then there's the uncertainty: do I include police checks and medical checks, or don't I? They're on the document checklist, yet the forums say to wait until you're asked due to the time constraint--both things are only valid for a year, and if it takes more than a year for your visa to be processed, you have to get them redone anyway. I'm leaning toward that because it means I can submit it on Monday. And SO many people have posted it and also gotten their visa approved, how can I be nervous?

But what if we don't have enough evidence of our relationship? For people who have been together for seven years, we certainly don't have the kind of evidence they're looking for! (Wills? We have to make wills? I'm 23, I don't want to face my own mortality!)

I wouldn't be this nervous if the visa didn't have such a hefty price tag, but there you go.

What this post boils down to: I am going to submit this visa application on Monday, gosh darnit. I am going to pay that fee, and I am going to hand this mammoth across the counter. Then I will be on a Bridging Visa, which means separation does NOT have to occur until a decision is made on the partner visa. Then I will be asked for a medical and police check, which is a sign that the visa will soon be approved, and I will provide them. Then my visa will be accepted. Then everyone will live happily ever after.

And no one will have to say goodbye at an airport again.

The end.

(Hopefully this isn't like Disney After Ever After.)

Thank you for allowing me this talk, everyone. You're very kind. I'll just be over here, breathing. Calmly. Rationally. Not thinking about airports.

Wednesday, March 20, 2013

New Blogging Challenge: Camp NaNoWriMo Status Updates

I have decided that I work best with short-term goals. This "blogging every day for the rest of my life thing" hasn't worked out so well for me, but "blogging every day for a week" certainly did, and "reviewing every book that I read" is going well, too. Therefore I have decided to present myself with various goals once I've finished one up in order to continue blogging relatively regularly. My newest one is this:

Every day in the month of April, I will blog every day about the state of my April NaNo Novel. These blog posts will contain the following in formation.

How many words did you write today?
How long did it take you to write them?
How many times did you use Write or Die?
On what settings?
How many Facebook breaks did you take?
How many characters have you killed off to date?
How many characters have died for the sake of word count?
How many NaNoWriMo Angels have you murdered? (note: using the backspace key murders NaNoWriMo angels).
Have you stopped using contractions yet?
Total NaNoWriMo Word Count So Far:
Words to Goal:
Days Remaining:

This questionnaire is a work in progress and has the potential to evolve as the month goes on, but the basic idea is there. I will also probably include complaints about how hard life is, wondering why I do this to myself a few times every year, singing praises to the plot bunnies for a good idea, and possibly even post excerpts and hope no one judges me for my NaNo-content.

I invite as many people as willing to join me on this April blogging quest. Feel free to leave questionnaire suggestions in the comments and I'll add them in! This is a fun way to keep track of your status and record your April NaNo journey.

Tuesday, March 19, 2013

Book Review: The Runaway King by Jennifer A. Nielsen

This is the second book in The Ascendance Trilogy which began with The False Prince. As such, this will contain spoilers for both the first book and also possibly this one once I get into it. If you don't like spoilers, you should read the books before reading this review. Also, apologies for inconsistencies, incoherence, and typos--it's late, I have a cold, and I'm still trying to work out my feelings about this book.

Jaron is king of Carthya, restored to his birthright and driving his regents mad with his sneaking out and insulting the servants. On the night of his family's funeral, he can be found in the garden, early for his own assassination--attacked by pirates, he's warned that if he doesn't concede Carthya to Avenia, the pirates would take care of it for him. Meanwhile, his regents plot to install a steward until he is of age in order to put an end to his antics. Sent away from Drylliad, Jaron knows he has only one choice: kill the pirate king and put an end to the pirate attacks on his country. There's just one problem... people who find the pirates don't usually find their way back again.

Okay. First of all, please know that The False Prince is ranked right up there with Bitterblue and Sorcery and Cecelia and Tamora Pierce and Phillip Pullman and--well, you get the idea. I read the first book in this series as an advance, eight months before it was released, so soon it was still in manuscript form, all printer pages bound in a ring. I loved it. I loved Sage, I loved the mystery and the suspense, I loved the politics and not knowing what happened next or how it was going to get to the conclusion I was sure I had puzzled out.

This book, The Runaway King, didn't hold as much appeal. There are so many different factors that I might repeat myself as I attempt to explain, but it simply wasn't as good.

In short, I think the main, biggest, massive problem is that it's marketed for Middle Grade--that is, under 12s (ish). I'm not sure what the published copy of The False Prince ended up being marketed toward, but my advance copy said "8+." 8+? Are you kidding me?

For the False Prince I disagreed with it because of the violence and killings seen in the first few chapters. Also the fact that much of what went on in Jaron's head would have been beyond most 8 year olds' comprehension--which I suppose I shouldn't judge, given that I quite enjoyed His Dark Materials at 10 and had no inkling it had anything to do with religion. But there you go.

For The Runaway King, I'm against the rating (10+) because I believe it's placed restrictions on the book that held it back from being just as awesome as the first. It was short, only 322 pages. While the book takes place in the space of 10 days, I believe that when a story takes place in a short time frame there's simply more reason to expand. This book could certainly have done with expansion. Character motivations, for a start (Jaron's for insisting on trusting Roden, Roden's for being trustworthy at the end). Political motivations. New character development. So much happened in those 10 days and I feel like the surface was barely scraped.

Other issues:

Sage. Jaron. He wasn't the same as he was in the previous book, and perhaps having the weight of kingship on his shoulders had something to do with that. In which case, I understand that he's a bit mean. But it also seemed like he wasn't quite as clever, despite the fact that he does get up to a lot of mischief. Perhaps we were simply more in his head than we were in the first one.

Speaking of which, much of the fun was taken out of the book because of that. I could anticipate Jaron's ever move, or nearly. He had a bunch of people who now knew his style of tricks--characters from the previous novel. Which is fine. But it seemed to me that it would make more sense to attempt to change his style and adapt rather than get up to the same old tricks again. Yeah, okay, the broken leg at the end threw a loop in his plans but it seemed forced.

Perhaps what I'm getting at is that there wasn't as much intrigue in this one as there was in the last. How could there be, with that mystery solved? I suppose there was a mystery in this one too--"How will Jaron escape the pirates?"--but the ending was incredibly predictable. I could have told you that was going to happen at the start. Granted, I could have told you the ending of the False Prince at the start too, except with that one the more I read the more it seemed impossible. With The Runaway King, every solution seemed too easy. Which I guess goes back to the fact that it was marketed as Middle Grade, and thus had to read like it. If more of the characters' motivations and such were shown, I would have been less inclined to think each solution was so easy. As it was, I was a bit disappointed with the plot and the characters.

I don't mean to say it wasn't worth the read. It was. I LIKE the characters well enough, I liked their interactions, I thought the plot line was good for what it was--a middle grade story. If I had gone into the book expecting to be taken on a journey with pirates and sword fighting and a medieval setting with a middle grade flair, I would have quite enjoyed it. But I went in thinking it was going to be The False Prince, and it wasn't. It could be a book that sweetens with rereads, a theory I hope to test soon.

I also don't want anyone thinking I'm not going to read the third book. Of course I will. It's been my experience that second books in a trilogy aren't always the best--it's the first or third books that are usually people's favorites. I'm excited to see what the third book has to offer (at the very least, it's going to be difficult to accomplish an entire war in 300 pages. Here's to Book #3 being longer than the last!)

If you have not yet read the False Prince, please do--it's an excellent book that needs to be read by more of my friends so we can have excited talks about it. And if you read The False Prince, don't hesitate to read its sequel. If you're anything like me, you're dying to know what happens next. The Runaway King wasn't a bad book by any means--it's certainly more entertaining than half the books I've read so far this year. It was simply different, and if you go into your reading adventure with that in mind, you won't be disappointed.

Thursday, March 14, 2013

Book Review: Enchanted Glass by Diana Wynne Jones

I finished this days ago and have been super lazy with my blog posts--apologies.

When Andrew Hope inherits his grandfather's field of care, he doesn't know what he's gotten himself into. It's much more than taking on a crotchety old gardener who dumps tasteless vegetables into his arms each day; it's more than an equally crotchety housekeeper who keeps shoving the piano back into its place in a dark corner, and only makes cauliflower cheese for dinner; it's even bigger than a giant named Groil who eats all those tasteless vegetables after they're tossed up on the roof, though he has something to do with it. Where it really starts and ends is with Aidan Cain, a boy who shows up on Andrew's doorstep with things chasing after him, bearing little more than a wallet that can make its own money and a handy magical trick with his glasses. Together with a handful of other quirky characters, they must find out why Aidan is being pursued and how to stop him from being taken by those pursuing him.

Reading this book was bitter-sweet, as it's one of the last books Diana Wynne Jones--one of my absolute favorite authors--published before she died. I drank up each page knowing that there would be nothing new from her in the years to come. Perhaps that's why I put of reading it for so long. I feel like awesome authors should be granted an exceptionally long life, if not immortality.

That said, it wasn't my favorite of hers by a long shot. It did contain all the magic every DWJ novel contains--that quaint, small-town-England, magic is every day and completely accepted, magic. Not only giants and were-dogs and ghosts and fairies, but that small-town feel that makes you feel like you've been plopped in the middle of the British Isles and you don't want to return home. Harry Potter had that, and so did His Dark Materials. I don't know what it is about Britain, but it's magical. And DWJ knew that, and she wrote it perfectly.

Her characters are always fantastic, too--full of quirks like those above, completely individual and persistent in their individuality, funny and lovable even at their most annoying, the kind of people you wish you could sit in a room with and just watch with your knuckles tucked into your mouth to keep from laughing. They're so real you can see them in the room with you. I'm pretty sure Mrs. Stock was based on my grandmother, but don't tell her I said that.

The magic and the awesome characters are what kept me going. The plot itself dragged a bit for me. I don't think it was a case of "I'm getting too old for this" either--I didn't really see where the plot was going for a while, it seemed like mostly it was an exploration of character, which is fine, but a balance does need to be struck. 3/4 of the way through I had trouble keeping focused on what was going on and getting a bit tired of cauliflower cheese.

That isn't to say that this book isn't worth a read--like I said, I quite liked different aspects of it, it just didn't fully come together for me. Besides, it's Diana Wynne Jones--if you're a fan, you have to read it!

If you haven't read any Diana Wynne Jones before, I highly recommend starting with the Chronicles of Chrestomanci (Charmed Life OR The Lives of Christopher Chant first!) or Howl's Moving Castle. Both of them are awesome and really give you a feel for DWJ. Like I said, she's one of my favorite authors, and one of those people I think is in the "new children's classics" category, right up there with Harry Potter.

Saturday, March 9, 2013

Updates

Phew--well, this week flew by in a mess of deadlines and topic brainstorming! I've sent in my first articles to both of those writing jobs I was talking about in a previous post.

To clarify, I'm definitely doing one of them each week-- the one where I get to pick whatever I want to write about and put it up once (or more) a week. That's for Top Shelf Magazine, which I highly recommend for some fun reading. And to my writerly friends, I'm not sure, but they might still be taking new writers on, if you're interested. It's unpaid, but a great way to get your name in print and something to put on your resume. I know a lot of you would be writing for fun anyway--why not get it published?

The second was for Today I Found Out, the site with articles about random facts. I was presented with three different options to write about. I started off writing about how blackboard chalk isn't actually chalk, but couldn't find enough information about it to write a nearly 1000 word article (yes, okay, chalk is gypsum--but when did it switch to gypsum? Why? Couldn't find answers to my burning questions.) The one I ended up writing about was on Vasili Blokhin, the man who killed over 7000 people in 28 days, one at a time, becoming the world's most prolific executioner. Interesting stuff. I'll link you if it gets put up on the site.

With that job, I sent in a few writing samples and was put on a short list. The people on the short list were all sent a few topics (not sure if we had he same ones or not) and they'll pick 1-3 people to write regularly for them based on those articles. Fingers crossed mine was better than the majority, but to avoid disappointment I'm not holding my breath--even if this would be a really cool opportunity!

It felt SO good to be able to put up some deadlines on the calendar. I'm submitting Mondays for Top Shelf, so my Mondays this month all have "TS article due!" on them. Ahh, at last--a schedule of sorts!

I've also told TIFO that I can write two articles each week. Might submit to them and TS more often than that if I don't get a real job soon. Something to fill my days, right?

Meanwhile, I've been neglecting this blog. No worries, I'm just going to finish reading "Enchanted Glass" by Diana Wynne Jones and also attempt to get rid of this ick-feeling I've been having so I can get out and DO something. So--stay tuned.

Tuesday, March 5, 2013

It's time for NaNoWriMo... again.

I honestly can't count the number of times I've participated in NaNoWriMo anymore, not since it became less "national novel writing month" and more "national novel writing monthS." I've been doing the November one since 2004, so that's easy enough, but all the ones in between? I have no idea.

And here we are again, on the launch evening of a brand new season of Camp NaNoWriMo. Last November might have been my most painful of all NaNoWriMo experiences so far, but I find myself filling in novel information and cabinmate requests and writing first sentences (blank pages are daunting) and generally wondering why I do this to myself multiple times every year.

It's the thrill of competition, I think, more than anything. I don't count myself a very competitive person--I've never understood sports of any kind, for instance. But when it comes to word-writing, I just HAVE to finish, even through sweat, blood, and tears. There's just something about writing 50,000 words in a month that makes me feel like I've accomplished something, and falling short is not on option (except in 2011 when I was in the middle of writing a 60-page history thesis AND a 400-page English thesis--but I don't allow myself other excuses.)

I've never completed a novel with NaNoWriMo, but the important thing is that I've been WRITING. That's the most important part of a writer's career if you hadn't already guessed, and yet we allow so many things get in the way of it: jobs (or job hunting), reading, household chores, the cat, Facebook, etc. This blog is the only thing I've really been writing since November.

That ends now. I want to be a published author, dangit, and I need something to publish to make that happen.

So. NaNo. I'm going to do Camp NaNoWriMo in April, and I'm going to reach 50,000 words, and then I'm going to write another 30,000 words in the months following, hopefully completing the story I've only half-planned, and then I'm going to edit it, and so help me, by November I'll have polished it enough to feel comfortable sending it off to places.

There. That's my new writing goal. Are you participating in NaNoWriMo? What are your hopes for your writing future?

Monday, March 4, 2013

What I think of e-readers after actually using one.

This is using Cal's Kindle, the normal, cheap-o one--not a touch screen, with the screen about the size of a mass market paperback's pages. I recognize that different e-readers have different features, so if you read something below and can advise that a different e-reader doesn't compare with something I've said, please do so!

THINGS I AM OKAY WITH:

1. The screen. The screen did not hurt my eyes like I thought it would. There WAS sometimes a glare when reading by lamplight, which was annoying, but not a big enough issue for me with this book to complain about it. I was reading mostly during the day, and natural light was fine.

2. Insta-delivery of books is pretty cool. I enjoy that.

3. Carrying ALL the books with you wherever you go. This would have been pretty convenient if I'd had one before I left home and somehow managed to afford an e-copy of all the books in my library. I've been missing some of them. This would also be good for when Cal and I go to Europe and can't afford to have space in our backpacks taken up by however many books I can read in a month.

THINGS I HATE:

1. The buttons on the side to "turn" the pages. On the kindle, there is a big button on either side with a little button on top of it. The big button is to go forward, the little button is to go back. My problem with this is in two parts. a) I kept accidentally clicking the buttons when, say, turning it on, or simply just sitting there. And woops, there goes my page. b) When such a thing happens you could click one of the buttons to make it go whichever way, right? Easy as. But for some reason it's hardwired into my brain that clicking the RIGHT buttons makes it go forward, while clicking the LEFT buttons makes it go back. None of this big button/little button stuff. So I'd accidentally go forward a page and then click the left big button a few times trying to find where I was supposed to be, only to realize that I was going forward even more.

2. The above wouldn't such a huge issue if there were any gosh-darned page numbers on the thing! Particularly those times when I turned it on and accidentally clicked the button, I often had no idea where I was and had to ruffle through trying to figure out where I left off. You can't put a bookmark in it, it just remembers where you were--whether you got there accidentally or not! (Not that I use bookmarks in books, anyway--because I have a great memory for page numbers -- which this doesn't have!)

3. There is no way that I discovered to find out how close you are to the end of a chapter, unless you click through the pages a bunch of times and click back. I prefer ending my reading session at the end of a chapter (this would ALSO make it a lot easier to figure out where I needed to start when I accidentally click the buttons turning it on). I suppose you could say you have to rifle through pages in a real book too, but when you're done rifling through 20 pages trying to find the end of the chapter, then you just flip 'em back into place and continue reading. I mean, I would consider it pretty dim not to keep a finger/bookmark/cat on the page you were reading while you're doing that, anyway.

4. Having to recharge a "book" seems pretty stupid to me.

5. It does not smell of book.

6. It does not feel of book.

7. There is no pretty cover for people to exclaim, "What's that you're reading??" and strike up an interesting conversation with people. Normally I hate it when people ask me what's that you're reading?? But when they do it with books it's because the cover looks like something they'd like to read and you can tell them about it. When they do it with Kindle they have nothing to go off of, so when you answer and they find out that it isn't Hemingway's Complete Works and get all disappointed, you're left in some social awkwardness hoping he gets off the bus really soon.

8. The pricing of a large number of the e-books that I looked up was roughly that of a paperback, but you don't get the physical book. As a writer, I think I would demand that of my own books if they go digital. However, as a reader, it seems silly to me to pay the same price for something that you can't hold and display on a shelf. I do see quite a few deals, so I suppose you just have to hit it at the right time.

9. You can't just browse e-books as you might books--I don't mean in a bookstore, but even online, it isn't the same. Not with Amazon's "everyone and their brother can get published, here you go" scheme. No offense to anyone who self-publishes, but you have to admit it's a dangerous thing to give people free reign of the industry. I found several interesting looking e-books which I was smart enough to take a peek at before buying. Absolutely riddled with typos, the first pages looking like something I wrote when I was twelve... it was awful. So instead, I had to look through my Goodreads "to-read" list and see if there was a kindle edition available. (Note: mostly, there wasn't.)

REASONS I WOULD CONTINUE USING AN E-READER:

1. Travel, as stated above. I'll actually buy my own before Europe (or we might get a bigger tablet of some description so that we don't have to bring our laptops and can Skype with that). It's a lot smaller than a bunch of books and therefore more convenient to people living out of a single backpack for a month or more.

2. Those times few and far between when I've run out of new books and various bookstores and libraries are closed and I don't feel like rereading what's on my shelves. Assuming I can find an e-edition of various titles, this seems like it will be convenient.

However, this will NOT be an all the time thing. I was going absolutely mad. Perhaps you get used to the buttons. But if I can't get used to them after reading an entire book (nearly 500 print-pages long!), I really don't know that I'll ever get used to them. Perhaps other e-readers don't have such stupidly placed buttons. Others can advise me on that below.

Sunday, March 3, 2013

Book Review: A Stranger to Command by Sherwood Smith

Okay, hold up--an entire book about Vidanric Renselaeus, Marquis of Shevraeth? How had I not read this before now? I admit, I knew it existed--I must have just forgotten how much I adore this character or something. Maybe my brain has grown fuzzy with age. Whatever--finally, the deed is done, and it was quite enjoyable. (WARNING: Crown Duel and Court Duel spoilers!)

Fifteen-year-old Vidanric Renselaeus has been sent away by his father to Marloven to learn the fighting arts. In part, because Vidanric was a prime target for a convenient, tragic accident at the hands of Galdran's cronies. And in part because, as he learns later, he needs to learn how to command an army if there is any hope he'll take down Galdran and become king himself. The book covers three and a half years, during which Vidanric goes from a learner, to a teacher, to a commander, making friends and enemies and mistakes along the way, smoothing his path to becoming a king.

Lame plot summary--I shouldn't be doing this late at night. But the idea is there. The character development in this book is amazing. The Vidanric we meet at the start is not the one who becomes king in Court Duel, nor even, really, the "court-bred fop" imagined by Meliara in Crown Duel. He is a teenage boy fresh from his father's pocket with no idea of the destiny in store for him. He doesn't want to be in Marloven learning the sword, he doesn't understand why he must learn to ride like a Marloven, he doesn't really care to think like a commander because he doesn't want to be one--but he does it all because daddy told him to, and there must be a reason.

By the end, he's everything we see in Crown and Court Duel, and more importantly, we see why. When reading C&C, I always thought it a bit odd that he knew so much about commanding and killing and wondered how he'd learned so much. Here, you can see how each decision formed him into who he becomes--and there are so many parallels with Meliara's story, I was laughing out loud. Those parallels explained their relationship to me, too; the attraction he felt for her, while I didn't really question it, did seem a bit off. It doesn't anymore. He IS Meliara, just a bit further along.

As you can imagine, a Shevraeth-who-is-Meliara is insanely amusing. But somehow, it all works.

It was interesting, too, to discover a new part of Sartor. Marloven is just as rich as Remalna, perhaps more so, and largely military-based. Thus, the book was packed with military strategy and knife throwing practice and politics and what have you, which I quite enjoy in my reading, but which probably weren't as action-packed as they sound. As with other books I've reviewed, I can see some readers losing interest, but for me it was everything I expected.

I do have complaints with this book that I didn't in C&C. Most prevalent was the constant switch in perspective. This wasn't just Vidanric's story--it was also Senrid's and Senelac's and a few others. But it wasn't that these characters were offered a chapter of their own. It was like it was third person omniscient in some places, which I haven't encountered often and I didn't really like the way it was executed here. It almost seemed like the easy way out--the reader learns things that maybe the reader doesn't really need to know. For instance, at the height of action, we're told "they couldn't know there wasn't really any danger" and I was like, well, that's a let down--why not build up the suspense until it's all certain? There were several moments like that. I didn't feel like the omniscience added anything to the story, but rather took away from it.

There were also a lot of instances where I was completely thrown off and confused--largely because this, rather been being a prequel to C&C, also acts as a sequel/bridge to a lot of other books in the same world, with characters popping in who didn't seem to have much of a purpose in the plot line other than to appear for hardcore fans' sake. Sort of like if JK Rowling wrote a book about Harry's children and Neville and Luna got their own side-plot that only kind of had anything to do with what the children were doing, and probably didn't matter in the grand scheme of things.

I mean, it was great that the king was there--he was necessary, but I wasn't so sure that his background, or the fact that he cast some hither-to-unknown-to-me-stopping-his-aging-spell on himself, was that integral. "Sartora" served absolutely no purpose that I could see. Little details kept popping up, which I assume had been explained previously, which hindered rather than helped.

And speaking of characters and plotlines, I felt like the romance aspect of this was a bit forced, but then, maybe I was just glowering with rage because... Meliara, dangit!

And while I'm picking on plotlines, I admit I didn't entirely understand the ending, which felt rushed. It was a long book, but I wouldn't have minded it being longer. I was left with so many questions--does Shevraeth ever see his friends again? What happened in Colend, exactly?

I feel like I'm complaining a lot more than I usually do, but that's probably because Vidanric is my absolute favorite character in literature, hands down. Wait... Numair. Okay, Shevraeth is tied as my favorite character in literature ever. I'm critical of things I love, I'm pretty sure I read that in my birthday book.

Anyway. Despite my complaints, I recommend this to anyone who loved Crown Duel and Court Duel, especially if you were as in love with Vidanric as I was. On that account, this book doesn't disappoint. It's worth it to see how he grows and changes and becomes who he was meant to be--and like I said, the parallels are so funny, but they aren't forced. Go out and get it now and let me know what you think!

**Oh! And I did notice a handful of typos, more than is normal to run across in a book. I read it on the Kindle, so I thought maybe they had a tendency toward more typos or something. Just thought I'd mention it.

***Also, OH MY GOD how it needs a new cover! One that looks like the Vidanric in my head, for a start.

Saturday, March 2, 2013

An Update on Writing, In Two Parts

First: I received the "Letter of Doom" from HarperVoyager yesterday. I didn't get in, needless to say (would you call it a Letter of Doom if you did? I suppose it could go both ways).

This was the contest that opened last October and was open to all fantasy/sci-fi authors, promising digital publication for a select few. They said they wanted to publish at least one book a month (but would undoubtedly take more of there were more than twelve awesome books). So, already the chances were higher than ABNA, though I didn't have a whole lot of hope for myself. I do like entering these contests as an exercise in pitch-writing, which I think I need to get better at. Are there classes for such things?

Anyway. I'm glad to finally know, and no worries, I'm not disappointed. Now I'm free to enter more contests! (Or send it off to agents... actually, how about I start that editing process soon, hmm?)

Second, and more uplifting: a little while ago I sent off some applications to write for various blogs and magazines and websites. Almost all of these were on a "paid with experience" basis, which I am perfectly okay with. I just need something to fill my otherwise unemployed time, and having publications out there with something legitimate never hurts, either!

So, a few days ago in my inbox there was an e-mail offering a spot as a regular columnist with an online magazine. I won't go into too much detail yet as I don't have all the details yet myself, but... I'm excited!

AND THEN this morning there was another e-mail in my inbox from one I'd applied to a while ago and thought had probably overlooked me. It's really nice when an e-mail is like "sorry this took so long" but "by the way, you're on the shortlist!" And for this one, there's money involved. I had to quote a price per article in my application. Having absolutely no idea, I did a bit of research and erred on the cheap side from that research--$20/article.

So: I'm writing a trial article for them (todayifoundout.com if you want to look 'em up!), and if they like that enough (and I don't have competition that's too fierce!) I might be invited to write for them regularly (and get paid, too!).

Obviously this isn't "quit my day job" money, but it's money for writing! This is what I've wanted since I was a kid. And I get to learn random facts along the way--what could be better?

Tuesday, February 26, 2013

The E-Reader Experiment and a plea for books

I don't own an e-reader and generally I think about them as a lesser entity, not worthy of bearing the words of perfectly legitimate books. I know my opinion is pretty extreme, and I'm sure there are plenty of reasons for e-readers (travel being one of them). But, other than reading a few pages of a book I didn't like on Cal's e-reader, I decided I should probably attempt a full book so that my opinion can be justified (or, I mean, refuted. That could happen too. Maybe).

Thus: A Stranger to Command by Sherwood Smith.

Crown Duel is one of my favorite books, largely because of Vidanric, so a book all about Vidanric is going to be awesome, right? What better way to attempt to like e-readers than this?

Firstly, it was really hard to find a book. Mostly I've just been having book-finding problems all around--books I want to read, availability at the library/in this country, and then books that were actually available in e-book format. But I've wanted to read this one for a long time.

The point being, I will update you all on this experiment over the next few days. I hope to emerge with a better opinion, but right now I just don't see the point of not having a book in my hand. Please feel free to list reasons why I should like e-readers below.

ALSO, if you could PLEASE give me some book recommendations, I would love you forever! As you can probably see from reviews, my very favorite books are YA fantasy--usually historical, "sword and sorcery" in nature. However, I would be open to anything if you think it's awesome.

Sunday, February 24, 2013

Book Review: Seraphina by Rachel Hartman

Days before the dragon Ardmagar is due to arrive to celebrate 40 years of peace, the prince's headless body is found, and the people suspect a dragon did it. With humans already on edge around dragonkind--even those in their saarantras, or human, state--the death of Prince Rufus creates more problems for the guards whose duty it is to keep the Ardmagar and dragonkind safe. Plots and rumors of assassination attempts abound, quietly dragging Music Mistress Seraphina into the foray.

A young woman wrapped in her own secrets, Seraphina together with Prince Lucian and Princess Glisselda work together to preserve the peace. Facing down dragons, a steely dagger, dancing, and a gossip-hungry governess, Seraphina stumbles through her history, her mind, and the mystery, to come to one conclusion: love is not a disease.

Perhaps one of my more cryptic summaries, but accurate nonetheless. I barely remember reading the back of the book when I found it in a discount bookstore--I picked it up after recognizing the title as something I marked "to-read" on Goodreads--and I loved the reveal of Seraphina's secret after those first few chapters, not seeing it coming at all.

On my copy of the book, there are two recommendations from authors. One from Christopher Paolini, recommending it as well-written with interesting dragons--an opinion which, my apologies to any fans, I took with a grain of salt given my personal opinion of his books, which isn't very high. The second was a simple one from Tamora Pierce stating simply, "I love this book!" which is enough for me to purchase any book at all, supposing it's written in past tense.

Seraphina did not disappoint. I've picked up so many books recently that I haven't had the concentration or will to finish, and this was like a breath of fresh air. Beautifully written with gorgeous descriptions of a wintry, magical castle scene. Sentences about music I could hear as if it played in my ear; luscious gowns, playful balls, the grit and grime of the exiled knights' cave--all of which I could see quite clearly in my mind's eye.

I was astounded by the characters' ability to grow--particularly Princess Glisselda who I hated the first time I met her, and adored by the last page. Lucian and Seraphina herself change, too, but more subtly. I think several of the dragons in their saarantras form were always the same, but they allow a deeper view into their suppressed emotions by the end of the book.

As for plot--the author had me fooled. At least, pretty much. I followed the characters' every thought, which is probably a pretty silly thing to do, but both Seraphina and Lucian were so rational and so correct for so long that--well, why wouldn't I believe their hunches? I did have the perpetrator pegged as an accessory rather than a mere annoyance by the latter half of the novel, but still. I'm usually spot on and it excites me when I'm not.

My only real complaint is an issue of what may have been edited-out continuity. I'm not entirely sure Seraphina ever divulged certain information in her teacher, Orma. I'll leave out the information in question as it's the result of another sub-plot I think would be more interesting to find out on your own. But I felt this information should have been divulged. At any rate, the secret is out by the end and is mentioned to Orma, who--heavily sedated he might be--didn't seem to blink an eyelash. Part of me wonders if I missed the revelation somehow--I was interrupted quite a bit around the section where Seraphina makes the discovery--but I thought it needed to be in there a bit more prominently if that was the case. Long, drawn out conversation. If any of you have read it and know what I'm talking about, please leave a comment and let me know if I need to go back and reread.

Realistically, though, that isn't really part of the main plot, which I felt carried on smoothly, and, like I said, I was surprised by the end of it. This book ranks right up there with Bitterblue and The False Prince for me right now, and I'd recommend it to anyone who'd like something new to read. Luckily, the end is left wide open for a sequel, which I will have my eager hands on the moment it hits the shelves.

Friday, February 22, 2013

Travel Review: Shorncliffe Beach

We were going absolutely stir-crazy in this house. No internet, constant stream of rain, I was at work when it wasn't raining--we've barely had a chance to think about doing something fun, let alone get out and do it. And more to the point, with Emily, Sarah, and me all unemployed, it's hard to find something that's cheap and fun to do. So--to the mobile interwebs I went, looking for something new and exciting.

I found Shorncliffe Beach a few pages in on Trip Advisor. It wasn't a top attraction, but it was a beach, all we had to pay was $8 total transportation to get there and back, and the reviews said it was "lined with fish and chip places and coffee shops."

Well... I can say that it was not lined with fish and chip places and coffee shops, at least none that we saw.

It took just over an hour on public transport to get to the beach, taking a train from Roma Street station to Shorncliffe Station, and the beach was just a short walk from there. It isn't the prettiest of beaches, but I was expecting that, and I'm not sure if I would have wanted to swim in the water. It reminded me more of a big lake than an ocean--there weren't any waves, the sand was brown, and the water a bit mucky. But Cal had said that the beaches right off the coast of Brisbane weren't great. We're obviously going to go to the Gold Coast at some point, so they can get their fill of pretty beaches then!

Anyway. We walked down to the beach, which was at the very bottom of a hill. Maybe the fish and chip places were lining the street above, or something, but we didn't go up to check. First we went to the pier, but it was closed off, so we walked down the beach to another pier-like-thing that probably wasn't meant to be walked on and we climbed on it and walked to the edge.

The beach area was pretty tiny, but it was an awesome place for shell collecting. While there were a lot of ground-up shells, there were also tons of whole ones without any crabs or anything living in them. We found lots of cool ones. Sarah even found some sea glass. Also, tons of jellyfish--the big, proper, these-look-like-they-fell-out-of-Finding-Nemo jellyfish, not the bluebottles that wash up on the Gold Coast.

Then, of course, because they decided to go to the beach with an Upton--that is, me--it started raining. Which wasn't such a bad thing, because once we left the beach area the wind died down and when it wasn't raining, it was hot and humid.

We took shelter in the playground, which was AWESOME. I mean, I'm almost two-three and I thought it was awesome. Kids would love this thing. Lots of secret hideaways and staircases and ropes and slides. There were only a few kids there, all a bit too young to play on the "big kid" equipment (there's a place for little guys too)--probably because it was raining. Though, I did read in the reviews that Shorncliffe is usually a bit quiet, so it might be a good idea to visit if you don't want crowds.

After, we walked back to Sandgate--one train stop before Shorncliffe--along a nice walkway that would be excellent for running if people are into that sort of thing. It was lined with covered areas complete with barbecue facilities and drinking fountains--perfect places for family get-togethers or something. When we reached the end of the walkway the rain just started coming down, so we briefly took shelter under a pavilion and left Cal to look up where the nearest food place was while we ran out and conquered the rain (as we do).

Turns out, we were mere feet from a fish and chip place, whose name I regrettably cannot remember. We all only ordered chips. Cal and I probably had gotten a few too many, but I was dying for something salty at that point so I was okay with that. We went back to sit at a picnic table by the water, and that's when a reenactment of The Birds took place.

Seagulls everywhere. Not even kidding. One of them didn't have a foot (he was very mean). Cal and Sarah started throwing chips at them, which only encouraged more to surround us, and when we got up to leave they followed us. I'm not sure how we shook them.

From there, we had a short walk to Sandgate Station and hopped on a train back to the city.

Overall, I don't think it was the most fun we could have had in a day, but it was cheap and enjoyable, and we got some pretty cool pictures with a stormy-sky backdrop. I wouldn't call it a top attraction, but if I had more guests who were coming to stay for an extended period of time, I'd take them there, too.

Thursday, February 21, 2013

Things I Haven't Done

This blog is about reading, writing, and blogging--and over the last two internetless weeks, I've barely done anything of the sort. That's pretty sad really, given that the lack of internet distraction should have provided ample time to get all of those things done. Alas, I did play a lot of board games, worked extra hours, and rolled about on the floor attempting to make amusing my internetless existence.

I DIDN'T READ, at least not very efficiently, largely because every book I pulled off the shelf turned out to be rather boring, actually. I keep having problems with this: I get a book from the library/bookfest/wherever and think it's going to be awesome, and then I start reading and I want to fall asleep. If I can struggle through one of them I'll put a review up, but it's hard to put my finger on exactly what I don't like about them... I guess the action isn't moving fast enough, or I just don't like the characters. Either way, I was never excited to start reading, with the result that my biggest reading time--right before bed--was mostly spent sleeping instead.

However, we did just stop at a discount bookstore in the city, which didn't have a lot of selection but DID have a book called Seraphina, which caught my eye because I was pretty sure I'd added it as "to-read" on Goodreads some time before (I was right). Slipping into this book was like breathing for the first time after all those duds, so I can happily report that there will be a review--and quite a favorable one, if the first 50 pages are any indication--quite soon.

I DIDN'T WRITE because, in terms of blog posts, I had so little to write about and no Google to find some topics (that is the lamest thing that has ever come out of my mouth--er, fingertips?). In terms of story, I did do a bit more planning on my new project, through chapter five. I'd love to start writing it but I'm trying to make myself wait until I have a middle and an end planned out or this one will go the way of just about every other story I've started--the recycling bin. I did ad a stunning number of mini-conversations between characters to OneNote, but I'm not sure if that counts.

I DIDN'T TRAVEL nearly as much as I wanted to with Emily and Sarah here and all--it was raining, again we were internetless so once we reached the bounds of my knowledge we were without travel sites telling us where to go (so why didn't you just go to the tourist information centre like a normal person, you ask. Not entirely sure.) We did get out and about a few days, going to Shorncliffe on Wednesday, which I suppose I could write up a post about and probably will if I don't come up with anything else that's interesting.

So--there you have it. My confessions. And from this day forward, as long as I have internet, I solemnly swear to return to my writing of blog posts every day, so help me spatulas.

Thursday, February 14, 2013

Book Review: Magic Under Glass by Jaclyn Dolamore

Nimira isn't expecting to be hired by Mr. Hollin Parry to accompany a piano-playing automaton, but she jumps at the offer. Rumors abound that the automaton is haunted, but Nimira is willing to take the chance if it means higher pay and a better living situation than her current one. The moment she's alone with the automaton, he comes to life and informs her that he is the spirit of a fairy prince, trapped in the automaton's body. Soon, she and her employer are wrapped up in quest to save the fairy realm--a quest that risks their very lives.

Okay, so I mostly paraphrased the back of the book--but it's a good summary. This book wasn't quite what I expected, but I've wanted to read it for a very long time. It's one of those books that I saw as soon as it was released, thought I should get it, but then someone else reviewed it for the bookstore website before I could and I needed to review other books, so it got pushed to the end of the pile. Needless to say, when I found this in the library a few days ago, I was quite pleased!

The book was much lighter and fun than I thought it would be--it only took me a few hours to finish it. That said, it wasn't a waste of time by any means. I was caught up in Nimira's adventures, excited to learn about the automaton, charmed and beguiled by Mr. Hollin Parry (who confused me greatly when his name was used in the possessive), wishing for the fairy prince to be restored to his real body--and disappointed when the story ended, though I'm happy to say I'm going to reserve a copy of the sequel at the library after I post this.

A few of the twists I saw long before Nimira did, but I tend to, so I wasn't too disappointed. The story was fresh and different, played out by characters who were interesting and filled with their own secrets and history, in a world with magic and fairies and unicorns.

This review is quite short... but the book was relatively short (225 pages) compared to most things I read, too. I'd recommend it to anyone looking for a quick, entertaining read.

Tuesday, February 12, 2013

Book Review: The Battle for Gullywith by Susan Hill


Oliver Mackenzie Brown hates the thought of leaving everything he knows to live in a run-down house in the country his parents thought would be a good idea to buy. When the family arrives, there’s no heat, the roof is leaking, the barn is falling in on itself, and strange rune-marked stones are appearing everywhere. Olly soon meets KK and Nonny Dreever who explain that the Stone King wants to take back Gullywith. With only an army of brass tortoises and bats on their side, and some help from a mysterious bookseller, will they be able to save the house—and themselves—from the Stone King?

I think if you are a younger reader than I am, who has read a lot less than I have, who is more willing to suspend your disbelief, you would enjoy this book a lot more than I did. Though I am 22 years old and an avid reader of children’s fiction, I don’t find that I come across books that make me say “if I was younger I’d like it” very often. (Ask me again when I’m thirty—attending a university that cancelled classes once a year to encourage everyone to dress up like fairies might have extended my childhood a little bit.)

The point is, this was technically urban fantasy (maybe that’s not the right term—modern fantasy?). It took place in contemporary times and strange, wacky things kept happening and Olly kept looking at them like “Oh, isn’t that interesting, I’ll roll with that” and as readers we don’t get an explanation as to why moving brass tortoises suddenly appear, or why a colony of bats is helping out, or how the characters know they’re helping in the first place. We are completely thrown when a Stone King starts turning Olly and KK to stone. And I wasn’t entirely sold on the Stone King’s role as an antagonist even after that, because from what I can understand, Gullywith was his to begin with and was taken away and now he wants it back—legit, right?

And if the plot was confusing, the characters were irritating. I mean, they actually had their own personalities and acted within each personality’s bounds, but I couldn’t stand any of them. Olly’s parents were probably the worst—the mother wanted to buy Gullywith in the first place, and all she did was complain about it from the second they walked through the door. The father was a bit of a pushover and reprimanded Olly a handful of times for reasons I couldn’t understand, and both of the parents kept foisting the toddler sister onto Olly, who was only 10, and had some saving the world to do. (I actually wasn’t entirely sold on the sister’s whole purpose in the book. She probably could have been cut and no one would miss the “dada gaga mama” babble in the background of conversation.)

It seemed strange to me that Olly himself was so dead set against Gullywith, and yet a few hours after they arrive, as he’s sulking on the garden wall, KK appears and magically everything is okay with Gullywith. Yeah, his adventures start and whatnot, but it just seems too sudden. If he’d had some internal monologue about “wouldn’t it be great if we’d never lived here so I didn’t have all this responsibility on my shoulders” I would have been more okay with it. Alas.

That said, I thought the setting was quite well done—described well enough to be magical, while keeping in mind that it really is more modern. Despite all the happenings, it made me want to live at Gullywith—but I have a thing for cool, old, magical houses.

The book isn’t without its merits, but I had trouble stemming a flow of questions with each turn of the page. The intended audience would enjoy The Battle for Gullywith a lot more than I did.

Excuses!


I have failed in my goal—actually, did I make it a week? I don’t even know. Ha!

At any rate, I do have the excuse of having no internet for several days, which is pretty legit given that it would be impossible to put up a blog post without the internet. This does not, however, excuse me from not writing them in the first place, since I have had access to a computer and electricity to charge the computer, and even if I hadn’t there’s a perfectly good notebook and pen right over there.

So. What’s been happening? My last few days went something like this:

On Friday I woke up at five in the morning to get ready and head out the door so that I could meet my lovely friends joining me in Australia. I was a bit nervous they would already be out when I got there because the earliest public transport got me to the airport an hour after they landed. Taking into account getting off the plane and going through customs and getting their luggage and taking their luggage through the scanners and dog-sniffers, I thought I’d be cutting it close, but not that close.

Turns out, my bus was just early enough that I was able to catch the train before the train I was supposed to catch and arrived 15 minutes early. There, I thought—I’ve definitely beaten them now.

I did a quick cursory look around the arrival area just to be sure, and went to stand in front of the customs exist with my camera in hand and practically bouncing for joy. And I waited. And waited. And waited. (There will be a video of this later.)

Finally, at 7:30 when I started to see people from LAX coming through, I peeled away from the exit and started another circuit of the airport. I hadn’t done it earlier because I thought, what if they come through while I’m wandering around and then I go and stand in front of the arrivals section again and they’re off sitting somewhere? I headed toward a coffee place first, thinking that’d be the first thing I’d be doing if I had just gotten off a 15 hour flight, and as I’m walking over I hear “EMILY!”

And sure enough, there they were, waiting there for over an hour while I stood stupidly at the gate. Well then. Many hugs and squeals ensued, and we headed over to the taxi rank to get a taxi back, and when we got to the house I tossed ‘em in amidst the mess of boxes and suitcases, because we were moving that day.

Not a very convenient time for awesome people to arrive, and I felt SO bad about not being able to hang out with them much those first few days. On Friday, I was packing up little stuff while other people were getting the big stuff out of the house, and then I had an interview for a nanny position in Toowong that took about two and a half hours with travelling included. And on Saturday I was supposed to be working but moving had been so inefficient (I won’t even get into frustrations there, it’ll just make me angry all over again) that we had to keep moving stuff on Saturday AND on Sunday. Sunday I was so fed up that Cal and I went early and put every single item that was left in that house outside and started cleaning, and thank goodness, I was out of there by noon (angry and hungry and exhausted and sore—but gosh darnit, done!). Got back to new house, took a shower, and took Emily and Sarah to the shopping centre so they could finally get things they needed for comfort and meals.

By this point, we were pretty well set up in the new house (I mean, it’s livable, but there are still boxes everywhere you turn). I could have taken time to write some blog posts then, but we still don’t have internet here (as of February 12, 10:07 a.m.).

Yesterday we had loads of fun, which I think I’ll write up in a separate travel-y blog post later. Let’s just say, raspberry margarita slurpees from 7/11 were the low point of the day—and those were probably the most amazing things I have ever tasted!

Tuesday, February 5, 2013

General Read-Write-Travel Update, February 6

I was struggling to come up with a topic today, so much so that I've fallen behind in my blogging schedule. For the past week I've been one day ahead with my blog posts, finishing them the day before and posting them when I wake up. I had nothing finished last night, and unfortunately inspiration didn't strike while I slept--so here I am, at two in the afternoon, stuck and brooding and thinking I have far too much time on my hands to have NOTHING to write about. The result: general update.

Reading: I am currently reading a book called The Battle for Gullywith. I've been reading this book for a while, so you can probably guess that I'm not as thrilled with it as I thought I would be. I think I have just under 100 pages left, so I'm going to muddle through tonight and hopefully that will be my blog post for tomorrow. I purchased the book at Bookfest last month--hey, there's another topic for another day!

Writing: I'm hard at work plotting a new novel project, "The Foxglove Alliance." I'm getting extremely excited about actually writing it, but I'm not allowing myself just yet--mostly, I'm putting ideas and quotes and things into OneNote so nothing falls out of my head, and trying to get to know the setting and characters a bit better before I rush into anything. For NaNo last year, I thought I had a brilliant idea for a novel too, but it started falling apart because I hadn't planned anything at all and couldn't keep hold of all the strings. This time, I hope to avoid that. Writing plan: plot and do some sketchy-writing up until April, when I hope to feel ready enough to do a round of Camp NaNo. Or if writing is going well without a NaNo-incentive, keep doing whatever I've been doing. I'd like for it to be in a coherent state by December and enter it in the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award competition next January. (Long way off, but I think I could make this happen if I'm diligent!)

Travel: Cal and I haven't thought about additional travel plans since getting back from New Zealand (why doesn't Google Chrome recognize "Zealand" as a word?), except for a few more conversations about future Europe and beginning to think about pushing that back due to our current state of joblessness. However! I have two good friends who are making their way over here tomorrow! So excited for their arrival. I don't envy their 16-hour flight one bit, though. Good luck to them. When they get here and they're over their jetlag, we're hoping to visit a bunch of different places--Sydney, Melbourne, Cairns and the Great Barrier Reef, maybe Uluru and New Zealand again... probably Auckland, this time. You can be sure that this blog will be exploding with our adventures. Can't wait.

Monday, February 4, 2013

Books My Future Children Will Be Reading

I keep coming across lists of books that "kids must read" on Pinterest, and while I agree with a lot of the titles on those lists, a lot of them also include all kinds of classics that I just don't deem necessary to a fun, imaginative book-reading experience. I know, I know... call me a failed English major. But I didn't read many--any, really--classics as a young child. Maybe I should have. But my parents let me pick up whatever I wanted to read. That's what I intend to do with my children, too--despite the title of this post sounding a bit more demanding. I turned out okay feeding off the words of some of my favorite fantasy authors. These are the books I think my children should read if they follow in my fantasy-loving footsteps... (note: not everything is completely fantasy, but has sparked such childlike wonder in my memory that I thought they deserved a place on the list).


  1. Harry Potter Series by J.K. Rowling
  2. His Dark Materials trilogy by Philip Pullman
  3. Song of the Lioness by Tamora Pierce
  4. Immortals by Tamora Pierce
  5. Protector of the Small by Tamora Pierce
  6. The Chronicles of Chrestomanci by Diana Wynne Jones
  7. Howl's Moving Castle by Diana Wynne Jones
  8. Tale of Time City by Diana Wynne Jones
  9. Inkheart by Cornelia Funke
  10. The Thief Lord by Cornelia Funke
  11. The Harper Hall trilogy by Ane McCaffrey
  12. So You Want to be a Wizard by Diane Duane
  13. Island of the Aunts by Eva Ibbotson
  14. The Secret of Platform 13 by Eva Ibbotson
  15. Which Witch? by Eva Ibbotson
  16. A Series of Unfortunate Events by Lemony Snicket
  17. The Castle in the Attic by Elizabeth Winthrop
  18. The Last of the Really Great Wangdoodles by Julie Andrews
  19. East by Edith Pattou
  20. The Two Princesses of Bamarre by Gail Carson Levine
  21. Ella Enchanted by Gail Carson Levine
  22. The Magician's House Quartet by William Corlett
  23. Gone-Away Lake by Elizabeth Enright
Do you have any titles that you'd like your future children to read (or that you'll be reading to your future children)? Leave a comment below!

Sunday, February 3, 2013

Story Planning Techniques: Microsoft OneNote

I've never been much of what I would call a planner. I never really wrote out plotlines or summaries, never did much in-depth character development outside of writing scenes, and usually had no idea where a story was going. After ten years of near-obsession with one particular story, I guess I just didn't need it. I lived and breathed those characters, and while I didn't really know where the plot was going until it got there, I did finish it eventually.

Now that that story is finished, I've found myself scrambling to keep ideas and characters and names straight in my head. It was the same with last NaNo, too--trying to write something new and different definitely requires some different techniques, at least for me.

I've tried different plotting programs in the past--yWriter and Scrivener stand out--but didn't have much luck.  I also tried downloading an "open source writing planning software" program that looked legit but actually just downloaded a ton of random programs onto my computer that made ads pop up on ad-less websites, so that was a no-go. (No harm done--easily uninstalled.)

So I decided to try OneNote. I've actually tried OneNote before for novel planning but I think I was going about it all the wrong way. I already use OneNote for to-do lists, meal planning, travel, etc. so it's often open anyway.

How I Use OneNote to Plan a Novel

1. Create a new notebook. I named mine the title of the project, "The Foxglove Alliance."

2. Three different tabs: Plot, Characters, and Setting.

3. Pages in the plot tab:

  • Beginning-Middle-End, where I lay out the basics of what's happening in mini-paragraph form.
  • Random Scenes, where I post ideas for scenes to write, snippets of dialogue, etc. that wandered into my head but haven't been sorted yet.
  • A page for each chapter, where those random snippets and ideas are sorted into a coherent order. This will come much later in the planning process. At the moment I only have a good idea of what the first and last chapter will look like. (One Note makes it easy to cut/paste different blocks of text into different pages.)
4. Pages in the characters tab:

  • A main/general page outlining characters and their relationships. A "cast of characters" if you will. For instance: Lydia, the ambassador's daughter; Prince, her betrothed; Colette, her little sister" etc.
  • One page for each main character, filled with things like picture inspiration, character interview or a brief personality/appearance/history description. Motivations and their role in the story.
  • One page for each group of minor characters. So: "Lydia's Family" and very brief descriptions of each member, or "The Royal Family" and the same deal. This is also the place where I would go into descriptions of different organizations, which is significant to this story. For instance, I'd have a page called "The Foxglove Alliance," detail who they are, what they do, and who's in it.
5. Pages in the Setting tab:

  • Map page. Currently empty for this project, but I'll design a map of the world/city and put it here.
  • A page for each country, describing history, government, technology, landmarks, that sort of thing. I like to look at "World Factbook" for inspiration. It gives me an idea of the kind of things I might need to know about a place I'm creating, though following it exactly would probably be more than anyone needed to know.
And that, my friends, is my OneNote plan. At this point I think that's all I'll need, but if I add pages or get rid of pages, I'll let you know. Would love to hear about your experiences with writing software (or OneNote!). Which programs do you use, and what do you like/dislike about them? Or, if you just use notebooks, how do you organize everything?

Saturday, February 2, 2013

On Titles

I have a love/hate relationship with the thing called The Title. I used to keep a list of potential titles in one of my old writing folders--titles inspired by street or place names, or simply something I came up with one day that sounded like the title of something I'd like to read. Sometimes when I see titles a story starts to form, which is why I find title generators so fascinating. I could post links, but there are just so many of them--it's probably easier to google "your favorite genre title generator" instead.

Anyway, I sought one of these to title a new story idea that's been floating in my head--starring Lydia, who you can meet a few posts down. Such greats popped up as:

The Magic Company
The Twin's Child
The Golden Gamble
Fallen Road
Summer's Wing
Year in the Crossroad
Redemption of Clockwork
Child of the Tyranny
The Wizard's Flame-Pits
The Sharing Vampire (better than sparkling, surely)

You get the idea. I can just see stories unfolding with some of those (which you can totally use if you've been inspired, too!). Unfortunately, nothing has popped up that matches the story in my head--which is how we get to the hate part of the relationship. I am horrible at matching a title to a story. I always seem to come up with something kind of lame if it relates--cool, interesting titles never pop out at me when I already have a story in mind.

The biggest piece of advice that I get when it comes to this is to wait, and something will strike me. But I find it impossible to wait. Whatever shall I name the title of the document in which I'm writing/planning if I wait? I feel like along with characters and plot, a title is one of the first things I need to get anywhere with a story. Yes, I know it's all in my head.

So here I sit, clicking "Click here for your fantasy novel titles!" over and over again, waiting for something to strike me. Right now I'm thinking something along the lines of "Ally" or "Alliance." Maybe "Alliance of..." something. "The....Alliance?" I don't know.

If you have any tips and tricks for giving something a title, please share below--I'd love to hear them!

EDIT: Five minutes after posting this, I've stumbled upon the perfect thing: "The Foxglove Alliance." Now, to plot this out... maybe I'll have enough of an outline to do April-NaNo!

Friday, February 1, 2013

The Backpack Trials

The thought of backpacking across Europe probably seems a bit romantic. We'll be going in the dead of winter, since that's summer here and that's when Cal will have a chunk of time off, whether he's still studying or a teacher at that point. And besides, who wouldn't want to see Neuschwanstein frosted over with snow? We obviously won't be bringing tents and sleeping bags and setting up on a snowbank whenever we want to stop for the night. And what do the people of the internet say about that?

"Don't bother with a backpack, it's really more of a hassle. If you're not going to live rough, it's not worth it."

Um... have these people ever tried dragging a rolling suitcase behind them over cobblestone? It should be an Olympic sport, for goodness' sake! I mean, rolling suitcases have a habit of hitting my heels in the best of conditions--I think the handle's a bit too short for my long legs--but rolling it over cobblestone, or simply in a city where there are hundreds of people walking around you as you attempt to turn it back on its wheels after if was kicked over onto its side, again, was stress that I didn't need while attempting to find hostels and places of interest.

Not to mention, everything we need for a month plus any souvenirs we want to bring back with us is simply NOT going to fit in a couple of the standard carry-on suitcases. Not when you're talking bulky winter clothes. Which means you'd have to go next size up, and I shudder to think how that would hold up being dragged across Europe.

Moral of the story is, we're taking backpacks.

So the question turned into: which backpacks? As I started looking, I discovered quite quickly that there are a wide range of backpacks. Different sizes, some that open at the sides or bottom as well as the top, some with places for ice picks and skis and sleeping bags and water bottles, some with unclippable daypacks. Looking at them online is pretty much a nightmare. At the same time, I wanted to know what was out there before we started looking in stores so I had at least some idea of what to tell salespeople we wanted.

First, size. Per recommendations, I'm thinking 50L for me, and around 60-65L for Cal. We figured we'd pack lightly, hopefully with room to spare in both (for those souvenirs!). Next, I really would like one that has side-openings into the main compartment for ease of getting at things, but it's not hugely necessary. And I think my only other requirement is that I get one designed specifically for women.

We've been passing a store called Mountain Designs on the bus for ages, but never have time stop in. So, when we were in Wellington and saw a Mountain Designs right next to a Kathmandu which was next to another outdoorsy place I can't remember the name of, we thought we hit the jackpot.

We tried on tons of different backpacks, and I was swiftly coming to the conclusion that everything was the same and I didn't need to be in a store at all to buy a backpack, it would be just as easy to buy it online. And then.

The Osprey Aura 50L, size large. SO COMFORTABLE. Couldn't believe how comfortable it was. I was like, this is going to be the backpack for me. (AND it comes in purple!).

Cal tried on the Osprey Aether 65L, and had similar feelings. I can't remember about that one, but the Aura didn't have side access from what I can remember, and I'm pretty much ready to completely overlook that since it was roughly the most comfortable thing ever. We're obviously going to keep looking since we have months and months left and backpacks are expensive (to someone who's jobless and someone who's about to become jobless, anyway). Those are our front runners, though.

Have you ever gone backpacking and have any recommendations? We'd love to hear them!

Thursday, January 31, 2013

Character Interview: Lydia - Mandatory, Personal, Familial Questions

Note to Gwen: I promise I had this name the night before your recent flash fiction!

I used to like the idea of a "character interview" a lot, but never got very far with them. I think that's because I knew the characters I was working with so intimately. For me, these work a lot better when you're planning your characters rather than when you have them already. Lucky me, a little plot bunny bounced up to me out of the blue this morning with a little mini-character riding between its ears, so I thought I'd try to dig out some questions again. I used to have a formatted document with a bunch that looked nice printed out, but that went the way of the dodo a few computers ago, so I found these questions online instead. There you go--give or take 100 questions for your enjoyment. If you want to answer them for your own characters, I recommend going to the site. Aside from saving you the hassle of deleting all my answers to put your own in, I may have skipped a few questions that weren't relevant to the character or story. (I believe these questions were developed for roleplay rather than novels).

I'm only going to do a few sections at a time. Otherwise, it would probably be more than anyone would want to read through all at once!

Lydia

Mandatory Questions

1. What about you is heroic?
My ability to change and go against my very (stubborn) nature in order to seek truth and justice--after some persuading.

2. What about you is social? What do you like about people?
I enjoy interacting with all of my peers, learning the latest gossip and determining what they can do for me. I like that people can be read so easily, and that they are predictable.

5. Invent an adventure/plot that your character would actively undertake (as opposed to just tagging along)?
If ever there was an attack on my immediate family or personal servants, I would actively seek revenge with or without the help of the authorities.

Personal Questions

1. What is your real, birth name? What name do you use?
My birth name is Lydia Marienne (LAST NAME TO BE DETERMINED). I am known by a variety of things--Lady (LAST NAME) to the court, of course, though I tell my friends that's my mother. Miss (LAST NAME) among my acquaintances, as we are largely equals and find the niceties tedious at times. Lydia to my family and dearest friends, and milady to the servants, of course.

2. Do you have a nickname? What is it, and where did you get it? 
My parents will sometimes call me Lydi, and it is a right reserved only to them. When I was younger and less decorous, my younger sister called me Lydi and I pulled her hair.

3. What do you look like? (Include height, weight, hair, eyes, skin, apparent age, and distinguishing features)
I took after my mother in height--a middling five-foot-four. My sister must have taken after my father, as she's just about as tall as me and not done growing yet. I was gangly in my youth, but time has seen me fill out: curvy in the hips if not, so much, in the bust (though I hardly look like a child). Cheeks and arms just plump enough to show my health but not, of course, overindulgence. My skin was once creamy-white, but the people in my new home respect the strength that comes with color in one's cheeks, and I've enjoyed my time in the sun, if not the burns that sometimes come with it. The sun has also lightened my hair, bringing out golden streaks in the usually muddy blonde-brown. My sun-stroked features have brought out more blue in my eyes, which looked more like a storm-tossed sea against my pale complexion. A smattering of freckles has appeared across my daintily sloped nose. When I choose to smile--a real smile, that is--it is wide and shows nearly all of my top teeth. I am wearing my hair down at the moment, which I've told my mother makes me look like I'm no older than my sister. She says sixteen is no time to start acting like a grown woman, but that I may wear it up for the engagement announcement.

4. How do you dress most of the time?
In gowns, of course, of every color of the rainbow. It is the style these days for gowns to have short or even cap sleeves, often trimmed in lace like the neckline and hem, and embroidered with shiny threads in all those places too. The climate is too warm for the elaborate underskirts of the north, so the dresses largely hug the upper figure and drape over a lady's hips, sweeping the floor. As such, we are spared the need for uncomfortable footwear and often walk about in simple slippers instead. The gowns are made from a lovely breathable material which has been a saving grace in these summer months. My very favorite gown at the moment is a green and cream affair beaded with pearls and silver. Mother said it wasn't right for me to impose our beaded styles on the Southerners, but I overheard Lady Nickren say she was ordering one just like it for the next picnic. I am not allowed a hat yet, but I have plans for a large one topped with more flowers than you could find in the Queen's garden.

5. How do you "dress up?"
That depends entirely on what for. There haven't been many balls lately, as recent months have been hard, but for those we are given to fuller skirts that move with us as we twirl around the room. For riding, the southerners have done away with skirts altogether, for which I am most thankful. It's breeches and a riding coat instead, which poofs out from the hips in a semblance of a skirt. It makes it possible to ride on hunts--and they expect that we accompany the men. It's an entirely different affair for weddings, of course. I will be sweating in my long-sleeved, multi-layered gown, when the sleeves will come down to little points at my wrists and the train will be as long as Main Street, but I will look gorgeous every minute in purple and dove gray. I have already sent my plans to the dressmakers, they're just waiting on father's money.

6. How do you "dress down?"
I don't understand this question.

7. What do you wear when you go to sleep?
A nightgown, of course. Usually white, to save on dyeing, with barely any lace or embroidery at all. There is no one to impress while you sleep.

8. Do you wear any jewelry?
Yes, of course. Necklaces simply aren't done in the South, where the embroidery around the neckline is simply too much--anything else would look gaudy. Earrings and bracelets are more the thing, simple drops and bangles. And rings, of course--a family ring, a Sixteen ring (which everyone receives on their sixteenth birthday with their own personal seal), and, in my case, a lovely engagement ring with a sapphire in the centre.

9. In your opinion, what is your best feature?
My modesty.

10. What's your real birth date?
(to be determined when I next get my hands on my birthday book!)

11. Where do you live? Describe it: Is it messy, neat, avant-garde, sparse, etc.?
In the palace, of course. I love it here--there are so many people. Back home we lived on a secluded estate on the woods, with only father's boring state visitors and our servants for company. The palace here is far grander than any castle in the north, made for beauty rather than withstanding war. My family and I have an entire wing to ourselves. My suites themselves are generous, and I have been told that I may decorate them however I like. I've commissioned several paintings, but they haven't arrived yet.

12. Do you own a car? Describe it.
I don't know what a car is. A mode of transportation, you say? I see. Well, I have a horse--a lovely piebald mare gifted to me on my arrival. My family has a fleet of carriages, too, but those are hardly mine alone.

13. What is your most prized mundane possession? Why do you value it so much?
My Sixteen ring. A piece of jewelry it might be, but it has barely any value to anyone else. I'm able to use it to seal my own letters now, which means I am under my own authority, and nothing else could mean so much to me.

14. What one word best describes you?
Ambitious.

Familial Questions

1. What was your family like?
I grew up with my mother, father, and sister in a northern castle where my father worked as an advisor to the king. I never knew other family--I think father's brother came to visit once when I was small, but I can barely remember him. My grandparents and a few aunts and uncles are certainly still alive, but they don't visit us and there's never been an opportunity to visit them. I don't mind much--the castle had enough people in it to feel like family.

2. Who was your father, and what was he like?
My father is Sir Clement (LAST NAME). He grew up as the younger son of a wealthy merchant and went to war with the king when he was just a little older than me. He doesn't talk much about the war, so we don't know what happened, only the result: the king knighted my father and two other comrades and granted them titles and lands. I suppose it was for bravery or good deeds on the field. Whatever it was, it made our fortunes great, and he still acts as the king's key advisor. He's a very busy man, but that doesn't mean he doesn't have time for us. From dinner to breakfast, he sets all work aside and spends his time with his family. Once the king himself knocked on our door while we were playing an evening card game, and he sent him away saying he was far too busy to see him at the moment. He says there's many a man who worries so much about providing for his family that he forgets to spend time with it, and he wasn't going to be one of them.

3. Who was your mother, and what was she like?
My mother is Lady Angeline (LAST NAME). She was born into a prosperous noble family and was known in her youth for her style and ability to throw the best parties. She still has a party once a year in the winter months in order to raise everyone's spirits, but has largely settled into a role of instructing young noble girls in etiquette, a job she foisted on herself in my youth after meeting one too many of my friends who she didn't believe to be acting properly. I've never had a problem with her rules myself and don't consider her to be particularly strict, particularly not when she allows me to purchase just about anything I like from shops so long as I tolerate her coming along and stuffing me into every kind of fabric in the store.

4. What was your parents marriage like? Were they married? Did they remain married?
My parents began courting some years after my father was made a "Sir." My mother's family believed she was marrying below herself, but my father had become quite popular and was a favorite of the king, so no one could make too much of a fuss, not that I'm entirely certain my parents would have paid heed to what anyone said, anyway. They were quite in love--still are. There are arguments sometimes, of course, but never big ones, except when my father announced we were moving to the South. For a while I thought my mother would insist he go by himself, but she was persuaded in the end. They never stay mad at each other long, and I can't see that anything would tear them apart.

5. What were your siblings names? What were they like?
I have one younger sister named Colette. She's ten. Mostly people have quite a few more siblings than just one, but mama struggled to have Colette, and when she was born the doctors told her any more babies might do more harm than good. Colette takes more after mama than I do--she's very talkative, outgoing bordering on boisterous, able to make friends easily and take people as they are. She'll get in trouble with that later in life--not everyone can be trusted like she thinks they can.

6. What's the worst thing one of your siblings ever did to you? What's the worst thing you've done to one of your siblings?
I think I mentioned pulling her hair once. When she was quite small, Colette spit up all over my brand new dress--IN FRONT OF PEOPLE--which was extremely horrifying, but as she was only little I decided to forgive her. We are far enough apart in age that we don't see each other much during the day, so we don't have much chance to bicker. Colette adores me, and I think she can be cute (sometimes).

7. When's the last time you saw any member of your family? Where are they now?
At breakfast. I suspect father's taking luncheon with the king, while mama is entertaining some of the ambassadors' wives, and Colette is eating with the other children in the school room. I'm hungry, too, come to think, so maybe we should break for now and come back to the rest of your questions later.